For darling.

We sing and dance naked by the ocean
Laughing and crying flames fall to the waters
Wishing on the lucky stone
Stones that can change
Each piece a crafted excitement
Rains excitement with each moment
Slips into motion
I saw you looking back to me
At the ocean.

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  1. Warmest WindsAugust 5, 2012 at 12:25 PM

    This is longing for love and feeing seperated from life even. It is more a poem of deep sadness and it does not appear that way as if to conceal the pain.

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  2. Warmest WindsAugust 21, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    Right now this is about a break up, which both people are sad about. Yet there is a feeling of the eternity that was created in the love.

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  3. Warmest WindsSeptember 12, 2012 at 2:34 PM

    This poem evokes a feeling of the beloved to me.

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  4. Warmest WindsOctober 28, 2012 at 4:12 PM

    I felt a leaping sensation.

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  5. Warmest WindsJanuary 2, 2013 at 3:41 PM

    I want you..

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  6. Warmest WindsJanuary 26, 2013 at 4:32 PM

    Beautiful words like this rarely read or said or spoken.

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